* Changes to 'SAVE YOUR EYESIGHT'In order to be less rigid in terms of word placing within the poster, I decided to move the 2 sentences to occupy 2 sides of the poster. This structure is more innovative than the first draft.
In addition, I made changes to the tagline before the main message. The old one risks throwing the viewer out of the poster due to its long sentence while phrased in just 2 lines. To resolve this, I center-aligned the tagline and at the same time divided them into 3 sentences, so they appear more equally spreaded out.
This structure is much better thant the first draft as it takes into account how words should be structured and placed so as to enhance viewership.
In addition to changing the word placement, I also made changes to the bottom portion of the poster.
The previous draft has a fair colour at the bottom, and as such, it is not very effective in bringing out the main message. Hence, in the final draft, I darkened the whole of the bottom portion, so that the red message is able to be contrasted sharply against the now black background.
0 comments:
Post a Comment